19 Aug 2015

"I'll Fix You"


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CRACK!
*Bone snapping into place*


Perfect alignment; lesser mortals could wait for the x-rays. 
She was good. She made sure of that. 

With each bone she fixed, a bit of fractured soul mended. 
Never had abuse bled into more powerful a will.

35 comments:

  1. Nice one PeeVee...sad but resilient. Some people learn things the hard way

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  2. ohh such a powerful write!!! so brilliantly written ... that too in few words. Loved it.

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  3. Ah, Grey's... if anyone can fix broken bones and heal fractured souls, that woman can. Lovely response to the prompt.

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    1. Calipe Torres is the best no :)
      Thank you <3

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  4. Quite a solution to the problem, and a more positive one than abuse.

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    1. Thanks for dropping by Ms. Hickman :)
      Yes, if only more of us are able to turn the negative into the positive.

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    1. Thanks for dropping by, Infinity of 26! Such an interesting name, I have to find out what its all about :D

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  6. Strong content in little words. Well written. Sometimes you learn things the hard way. Thats the way life works.

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    1. As long as we don't dwell on the negative.... its all good :)

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  7. That's beautifully written. Positive and hopeful! Good one P!

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    1. Thank you, Parul..
      Hope, isn't it what makes the world go round :)

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    1. Thank you, Madame :) Glad you dropped by..

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  9. Better than the abuse that caused it.

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    1. Definitely better. Eons better.
      Thank you for dropping by, Kathy!

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  10. Perfect picture for the powerful message

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  11. Strong and powerful ... she surely is a brave lady.

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  12. With so less words, you have conevyed a very strong emotion...
    Loved this!

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  13. A will that none would dare to break, rather none can rather break!

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    1. Indeed. She is way too strong for that now.

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  14. That is SAD .. such incidents are still happening in our developed world.. I hope and wish they stop and everyone lives a happy life


    Bikram's

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    1. Hello, Mr. B. After real long :)
      It IS sad. But its shocking to see how many things we will sweep under the rug. That is more shocking to me.

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  15. She was awesome.
    Four lines and so crisp, me likey!
    I liked Cristina, that's who I wanna be.

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    1. Thanks En.

      Oooh another similarity, see. Yang IS the point of the show. Or rather was. Now I hate Rimes -_-

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    2. No, actually I identified with Mere more. So basically we are the twisted sisters :P

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  16. Good that it ended with a bit of hope. Though I wish it was a positive thing that had led her on that path instead of the abuse.

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    1. Me too. But how often are people made stronger by happiness?

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  17. To make something good out of something bad - Is there anything better than that?
    And I love Torres.

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