19 Aug 2015

"I'll Fix You"


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CRACK!
*Bone snapping into place*


Perfect alignment; lesser mortals could wait for the x-rays. 
She was good. She made sure of that. 

With each bone she fixed, a bit of fractured soul mended. 
Never had abuse bled into more powerful a will.

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35 comments:

  1. Unknown19 August 2015 at 18:31

    Nice one PeeVee...sad but resilient. Some people learn things the hard way

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  2. Rajlakshmi19 August 2015 at 18:45

    ohh such a powerful write!!! so brilliantly written ... that too in few words. Loved it.

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  3. Shailaja V19 August 2015 at 19:03

    Ah, Grey's... if anyone can fix broken bones and heal fractured souls, that woman can. Lovely response to the prompt.

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  4. TMWHickman19 August 2015 at 20:00

    Quite a solution to the problem, and a more positive one than abuse.

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.20 August 2015 at 17:36

      Thanks for dropping by Ms. Hickman :)
      Yes, if only more of us are able to turn the negative into the positive.

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  5. Anonymous20 August 2015 at 07:44

    Wow! I really liked this!

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.20 August 2015 at 17:36

      Thanks for dropping by, Infinity of 26! Such an interesting name, I have to find out what its all about :D

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  6. Harini20 August 2015 at 12:06

    Strong content in little words. Well written. Sometimes you learn things the hard way. Thats the way life works.

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.20 August 2015 at 17:37

      As long as we don't dwell on the negative.... its all good :)

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  7. Parul20 August 2015 at 13:38

    That's beautifully written. Positive and hopeful! Good one P!

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.20 August 2015 at 17:38

      Thank you, Parul..
      Hope, isn't it what makes the world go round :)

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  8. kalpana solsi20 August 2015 at 15:34

    A powerful piece of writing.

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  9. Unknown20 August 2015 at 16:52

    Better than the abuse that caused it.

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.20 August 2015 at 17:38

      Definitely better. Eons better.
      Thank you for dropping by, Kathy!

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  10. Jasbir Kaur Dalip (Beeray)20 August 2015 at 20:11

    Perfect picture for the powerful message

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  11. Amrit Sinha24 August 2015 at 10:29

    Strong and powerful ... she surely is a brave lady.

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  12. Locomente24 August 2015 at 11:07

    With so less words, you have conevyed a very strong emotion...
    Loved this!

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  13. Bogglehead24 August 2015 at 11:22

    A will that none would dare to break, rather none can rather break!

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  14. Bikramjit Singh Mann24 August 2015 at 15:25

    That is SAD .. such incidents are still happening in our developed world.. I hope and wish they stop and everyone lives a happy life


    Bikram's

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.28 August 2015 at 15:19

      Hello, Mr. B. After real long :)
      It IS sad. But its shocking to see how many things we will sweep under the rug. That is more shocking to me.

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  15. eN24 August 2015 at 22:40

    She was awesome.
    Four lines and so crisp, me likey!
    I liked Cristina, that's who I wanna be.

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.28 August 2015 at 15:19

      Thanks En.

      Oooh another similarity, see. Yang IS the point of the show. Or rather was. Now I hate Rimes -_-

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    2. CookieCrumbsInc.28 August 2015 at 15:20

      No, actually I identified with Mere more. So basically we are the twisted sisters :P

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  16. Vinay Leo R.25 August 2015 at 12:11

    Good that it ended with a bit of hope. Though I wish it was a positive thing that had led her on that path instead of the abuse.

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    1. CookieCrumbsInc.28 August 2015 at 15:20

      Me too. But how often are people made stronger by happiness?

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  17. Anonymous27 August 2015 at 09:06

    To make something good out of something bad - Is there anything better than that?
    And I love Torres.

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