20 May 2015

Perfidy

As her teeth trailed down the taut skin of his neck, she could feel his jagged pulse beating to the conga of his heart. Her hapless brain registered that her thirst for him was mirrored by his, even as he straddled her intimately against the window.

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He had fully intended to enjoy the surprise on her face at finding him home so early. Instead, the diamonds in his lax hands slipped and spilled on to the linoleum, as he watched his wife writhe in the throes of passion against the neighbor's window.



27 comments:

  1. Ooff. Poor him. And poor diamonds too. Wonderful use of the three words :) I'm yet to tie them together :P

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    1. I know right :/ diamonds gone to waste... Thaaank you :)

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  2. wow..i can only imagine the disappointment in his face..if i were the one,i don't know what i will do.

    www.glowyshoe.blogspot.com

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    1. I know :( I've the feels for him now :/

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  3. Whew! Steamy content---especially the straddling! ;)

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  4. Your writing flows beautifully. I wish I could write like you.

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    1. Aww :) come on! You write just as well, if not better!

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  5. Love, love, loved it! Wish it was a bit longer though. Splendid job there, PeeVee :)

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    1. I know!! Me too... I have one whole plot sitting inside my head -.- had to force myself to keep it short.

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  6. Ouch. Ouch.
    Nothing more to say.

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  7. oh boy is she going to be surprised. LOL

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    1. Heehee.... One hell of a surprise :P

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  8. So it's not the diamonds who are the woman's best friend... ;)

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  9. Ouch! I hope he leaves her after this...and takes the diamonds and everything else!

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    1. I hope so too, would serve her right.

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  10. Clearly she wanted more than diamonds...it is very hard to read a woman!

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    1. Whatever she wanted, she could have been more communicative instead of resorting to cheating on her husband.

      Thanks for dropping by! :)

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  11. He should slip the diamond in her drink and watch her choke on it and die.

    There is no forgiveness for infidelity. Absolutely none.

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    1. Lol... But no! That would be a waste of the beautiful diamond!

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  12. That hurt! And very badly.

    Kudos on such a short portrayal of a huge plot.

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Go on, you can say it.